Essay Planning

Planning:

Introduction:

-       Introduce the animator.

-       Introduce the animation.

-       The animation Factory makes the audience realise how much today we rely on machinery and technology to live our everyday life.

-       Feelings of regret and sadness.

-       The reason the audience got these emotions/feelings and got the message of the animation was because of the amount of work Miwa Matreyek put into line, tone and shape in the animation.

-       Conclude the intro and link to first paragraph.

Paragraph 1- Line

-Emphasise the amount of detail Miwa Matreyek put into lines.

-How they play a very large part in the animation and why they are important

-Example

-Link to next paragraph.

Paragraph 2- Tone

-       How tone makes the makes the audience realise the key message of the animation.

-       What tones are in the animation.

-       How tone helps trigger the audiences emotions.

-       Example.

-       Sum up the paragraph

-       Link to next paragraph.

Paragraph 3- Shape

-       How shape contributes to the trigger of the audiences emotions and how it helps convey the message.

-       About the shape in the animation what is similar about all of them (geometric, symmetric)

-       Why this conveys the message and the feelings of regret and sadness.

-       Example of where it does.

-       Sum up paragraph

-       Link to conclusion

Conclusion

-       Say what message and emotion the animation triggers and gives the audience.

-       How it triggers these emotions and this message.

-       Example- line

-       Example- tone

-       Example- shape

-       Concluding statement