Plot Outline Draft 1

Plot Outline

¥     Starts in detectives office

¥     Detective asking innocent girl questions about the murder

¥     He is asking her to think back to that night

¥     Fade to white

¥     She is back in her room lying in bed with dirty clothes still on with small blood stains in clothes.

¥     She has a headache so she goes down stairs to get a panadol

¥     She calls for her sister as she is walking to the kitchen

¥     She says, “Katie, where are you?” Walks into the living room.

¥     Detective asks what happened next

¥     Fade to white into a flashback of her seeing her sister on the ground

¥     Shot from her point of view looking at her sister

¥     Shot of her sisters point of view with someone standing behind her about to hit herzq

¥     Detective asks, “What’s the last thing you remember?”

¥     Fade to white her lying on the ground knocked out next to the window

¥     Opens her eyes a tiny bit to see a man fleeing..

¥     Detective asks, “What did he look like?”

¥     Innocent girl says, “He was very tall, but I didn’t see anything else.”

¥     Detective says, “Thank you, you can go now.”

¥     Girl walks out of office.

¥     Side detective walks in ask’ “How old was the girl?”

¥     Detective reply’s “12”

Side detective throws 5 newspapers on the table and says “we need to get him, according to this he will be kill