Plot List- Including Scenes

Plot Outline

Scene 1

¥     Starts in detectives office

¥     Detective asking Emma questions about the murder

¥     He is asking her to think back to that night

¥     Fade to white

Scene 2

¥     She is back in her room lying in bed with dirty clothes still on with small bloodstains in clothes.

¥     She has a headache so she goes down stairs to get a panadol

¥     Emma calls for her sister as she is walking to the kitchen

¥     Emma says, “Katie, where are you?” Walks into the living room.

Scene 3

¥     Detective asks what happened next

¥     Fade to white

Scene 4

¥     Flashback of her seeing her sister on the ground
¥     Drops glass of water

¥     Shot from her point of view looking at her sister

¥     Shot of her sisters point of view with someone standing behind her about to hit her

Scene 5

¥     Detective asks, “What’s the last thing you remember?”

¥     Fade to white

Scene 6

¥     Emma lying on the ground knocked out next to the window

¥     Opens her eyes a tiny bit to see a man fleeing.

Scene 7

¥     Detective asks, “What did he look like?”

¥     Emma says, “He was very tall, but I didn’t see anything else.”

¥     Emma says “That’s all I can remember, I don’t remember anything else”

¥     Detective says, “Thank you, you can go now.”

¥     Girl walks out of office.

Scene 8

¥     Side detective walks in ask’ “How old was the girl?”

¥     Detective reply’s “12”

¥     Side detective throws 5 newspapers on the table and says, “we need to get him, and according to this he will be killing again tonight.”

Plot Outline Draft 1

Plot Outline

¥     Starts in detectives office

¥     Detective asking innocent girl questions about the murder

¥     He is asking her to think back to that night

¥     Fade to white

¥     She is back in her room lying in bed with dirty clothes still on with small blood stains in clothes.

¥     She has a headache so she goes down stairs to get a panadol

¥     She calls for her sister as she is walking to the kitchen

¥     She says, “Katie, where are you?” Walks into the living room.

¥     Detective asks what happened next

¥     Fade to white into a flashback of her seeing her sister on the ground

¥     Shot from her point of view looking at her sister

¥     Shot of her sisters point of view with someone standing behind her about to hit herzq

¥     Detective asks, “What’s the last thing you remember?”

¥     Fade to white her lying on the ground knocked out next to the window

¥     Opens her eyes a tiny bit to see a man fleeing..

¥     Detective asks, “What did he look like?”

¥     Innocent girl says, “He was very tall, but I didn’t see anything else.”

¥     Detective says, “Thank you, you can go now.”

¥     Girl walks out of office.

¥     Side detective walks in ask’ “How old was the girl?”

¥     Detective reply’s “12”

Side detective throws 5 newspapers on the table and says “we need to get him, according to this he will be kill

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Protagonist: ·      Femme Fatale ·      Private Detective ·      Police Detective ·      Mafia Boss ·      Innocent Robber ·      Rebellious Teenager ·      One legged Man ·      Pedophilic Priest ·      Lady from the corner store Antagonist: ·      Pedophilic Priest ·      Murderer ·      Maintenance Man ·      Assassin ·      Tourist ·      Ninja ·      Bad Teacher ·      Plumber Sub-characters: o    School kids o  People walking down the street o  University students o  People playing sport o  People in a meeting Location/Setting: ·      30th century world ·      New York ·      Los Angeles ·      Chicago ·      Congested City ·      Suburban City ·      Poverty Place ·      Old train tunnels ·      Deserted Hospitals Supernatural Elements: ·      Cars can fly ·      Ghosts ·      Demon ·      Vampire ·      Mummy ·      Possessed People ·      Super Powers Extra Elements: ·      Sound ·      Music ·      Lightning ·        ·